Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Taylor Swift Was Wrong.

Loving you is not red. It never was. Loving you is the most brilliant blue of a late fall sky. Loving you is the yellow of the golden hour when summer is young. Loving you is the cool green of a forest that stretches uninterrupted for miles. Loving you is the crisp white of a brand new snowfall, untouched by grey humanity. Loving you is the cheerful orange glow of a campfire's embers. Loving you is the flashing silver underside of a minnow as it glides through a creek. Loving you is every color imaginable splashed across my heart, filling me in more ways than one. Loving you is color like I've never known.

5 comments:

  1. Aww, this is so sweet. :) (And of course the title caught my eye, because I love Taylor Swift). Is this a poem or a just a freewrite, because it works as both! :)

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    1. I just sort of wrote it on a whim, so it was just a freewrite, but I can totally see how it could be considered poetry :)

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  2. Love it!

    Molly Marie
    mollyslittlecorner.blogspot.com

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  3. This is gorgeous, and more accurate I would say. (Although that's coming from somebody who's never fallen in love, haha.) I think your description puts a more postive allure on the word "love", while the word "red" makes love seem passionate in a formidable way. The way you described it is appealing!

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